Wednesday 4 November 2009

hundred metres dash


rainclouds gallop high
hard i run panting breathless...
who will reach home first?

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4 comments:

Charu said...

This one is amazing... I just fell in love with this idea...

P. Venugopal said...

We have all run like this, remember?

kochuthresiamma p .j said...

lovely lines. u seem to be perfecting haiku art.congrats.

P. Venugopal said...

not haiku enough, as yet, madam. surely, you have read Basho. (i feel like bowing Japanese style just at the mention of his name.)